Dr. Jamie Bondage

Brian: I sighed and let her lead me away from my sister. I sighed. "Yes?" I asked, trying not to get upset. what did it matter anyways? It was only ...

Tristan: I laughed and picked up Grace. "Night sweetie. You are wonderful!" I kissed her cheek and waited for her mom to say goodnight.

Brian: I growled and glared. I sighed. "Hey. How's the new guy?" I asked. Amy smiled. "This is my sis, Amy. Amy, Chels." I sighed. The girl I thought I ...

Tristan: I blushed and watched Grace with pure delight. "You are such a cutie!" I said. Then I looked at Lilith. "Will she be okay by herself?"

Chris: I smiled and grabbed a piece of paper writing on it quickly. "How about you get to know me later? We could go get to coffee? Or...something?" I slipped ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I have a suggestion, try to capitalize your "i"s and the first letter of your sentences. Just a warning. XD So...I love English! That's my favorite ...

Chris: I chuckled. "Do you hate me already?" I whispered dangerously close to her ear. She was gorgeous and tempting. I sighed in pleasure and laughed.

This was really good! I didn't see any mistakes. I loved the feeling behind it. XD It was sweet and sad! Sorry this didn't help much. keep on writing. I ...

Big sister?! what happened to big brother? Why are we trading?! I'm so confused! Jamie

Brian: I looked at the gorgeous girl who sat down beside me. I chuckled. "Hey. My name's Brian." I said, winking at her. "Does a lovely girl like you have ...

**Alice, you can come into the math class late. chris will flirt with her and needs a distraction. XD** Chris: "Nothing's wrong." I growled, taking notes. I didn't want to ...

Aurora: I snuggled close to the warm body, pulling it's arms around me. I sighed in pleasure. It was heaven...laying there in that persons arms as I thought about Colt. ...

Wow! That was wonderful! I agree. There needs to be more punctuation. This was really good though! Extremely so! It was really powerful and moving! I loved the ending. Keep ...

aurora: I chuckled and pulled a blanket up around me, drifting off to sleep immediately, my red hair laying crasily all around the pillow. I smiled in my sleep, dreaming ...

Chris: I groaned inwardly. her soft neck, hairs softly laying on the back of it, was so tempting to kiss. I wanted to lick and suck it. I growled and ...